Saturday, March 24, 2007

Life itself is a great mystery. The great chemistry that exists in everything intrigues me. I personally, really enjoy reading Margaret Avison's Poems. You could say they're sort of like a mystery to me. This is because poems are similar to puzzles in such a way that you'll have to figure out the meaning of each word itself; why each word is place where they're placed; and the overall effect and message Avison is trying to convey to her readers. As I was re-reading “Cement Worker on a Hot Day”, I was trying to pick out some clues that would lead me to the bigger picture Avison was trying to paint. The first stanza is about how ordinary the “yellow hydrant” is: it is “just a knob shape”. I like how she separates “just a knob” and “shape” and places them on separate lines. It helps to create that ordinary feel for the objects that we see but don’t take the time to notice the details. The next two stanzas quickly step pass the everyday standing hydrant by bringing it into the spotlight by showing what it does best. The hydrant provides an abundant amount of life’s necessity: water. It is interesting to note that the third stanza is not aligned with the other stanzas in the poem. It gives an effect of water “gush[ing]” out of the hydrant. I think she is trying to tell us to take more notice to the objects that we pass by everyday. In the context of Chemistry, it’s like these objects have potential energy (stored energy) and that if we have the time to take notice, we can recognize the other forms of energy it can potentially change into.

4 comments:

Gilbert said...

Poetry! Good for you if you can make out what Avison is trying to put across. It is still quite difficult for me to understand her writing. I actually like poetry and even composed and recited peoms back in Kenya competitively upto national levels but it is just so different from my North American experience thus far. I just hope we are nt really required to analyze them in depth in our final exams coz I shall be on a totally different tangent from everyone else.

Brenda Ton said...

Wow Gibert! I agree with you...it might be hard to analyze poetry sometimes especially when you're exposed to poetry from different cultures. But I still think it's fun to try to uncover the hidden message!
Wow...sooo how long have you been living here?

kristina said...

I agree, Avison's poetry is really intreging. I find that the reason that I like it most is that I don't usually understand it the first time. I like to work at things and solve problems so for me, poetry is a challenge that needs to be overcome! Life wouldn't be interesting without challange, neither would fiction. Can you imagine reading things that are always straight forward and clear? It would be like reading "watch Jane run" over and over again! Poetry is bittersweet;it's great when you understand it, but it's not as fun when you don't get it at all!! Nice post Brenda!

TA Jon said...

Hey guys, great discussion. I agree poetry takes time, but it usually pays off. Think about it this way: you should spend as much time reading (and re-reading) a poem as you do a short story. Or something like that - good post Brenda. Gilbert, I'd be interested to see your poetry.